Hi my name is Jaylee Juliet Sifono Nouata and I go to Point England School.
Last week was my first day at school and I was nervous at first but then I got use to it. During school I loved working with people I never worked with before. School was so cool because we got to catch up with things from last year. I wish I am a year 8 because I really want to go to university and study to get an awesome job and to have that moment of freedom away from the country. If I had 3 wishes it would be to have a family and to be an awesome teacher and to have a great experience though my life.
Well that's my story, what’s yours?
Hey Jay'Lee,
ReplyDeleteI was just reading your post and it is a great post for a Year 6. I think your post just needed a little more detail and a little bit more of some vocab. But besides that I think your writing is great!!! I'll will be looking forward to your next piece of writing.
Yours Truly,
Sylvia
Hi Jaylee,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Brittany Pittman and I am in Dr. Stranges EDM310 class at the University of South Alabama. It sounds like you had a good first day last week, that’s great. Your three wishes sound a lot like my goals: being successful at work, someday having a family of my own and last to enjoy life and all it has to offer. I am glad you shared your first day on your blog. I also think your blog is so creative, keep up the good work.