Monday, September 5, 2011

My Weekend

In the weekend me and my family of five went to the beach on a sunny afternoon. It was a hilarious time that we spent together. We walked around the sand, played volleyball, touch and rugby. It was really fun and I bet if you were there you would of loved it too. We went to a familiar beach called Mission Bay which is very close to St Heliers, where my teacher lives. We were only there for an hour and a half so we made the most of the time that we were given. I Loved it so much and wished we were there longer.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jay,Lee

    That was a cool story about your holiday.It would be cool if I was there and Mission Bay is a nice place to have a swim.

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  2. Hey Jay Lee,
    I really like your writing and that you should use some speech marks and dose other stuff. Keep up the good work.

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