My aeroplane crashed and I laid on the sand screaming for HELP, after hours and hours no help had arrived...I could feel in my right shoulder cuts and bruises that may have been caused from the accident.
As I opened my eyes the sun shone so bright that all I could see was a big yellow puffy thing. I quickly got up in shock totally lost as I didn’t know where I was. “ HELP HELP!” I shouted.It had been 2days and I still remain stranded on some sort of Island, nothing to do but sit and wait for help. I could hear strange noises coming from a place nearby so I quickly got up and followed through, I looked over the bush and I saw a lot of people chattering away. I jumped over the bush and asked “ Excuse me I’m lost and can anyone help? “ everyone went quiet and they all giggled to themselves until the owner , who had been a producer from a television program called “ Pranked” and he said you just got “ Pranked!!” I just stood there looking depressed it was definitely a day to remember.
Thank's to Vanila for editing my work for me:)
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