Monday, February 18, 2013

NRL ALL STARS VS INDIGENOUS!!


I looked at her and asked for her help. I needed my team to win and I knew she could help. My family invaded my house with their screams and chants we were all over to watch the game. Indigenous VS NRL All Stars. The crowd was on fire, you could hear the heartbeats of the players through the tv screen.

That night we had a moment of silence to show  our respect to  the great  ‘ Jon Mannah’  a former NRL league player who passed away with cancer.  The night sky was showing its support by shining its stars. My dad also tried to show his support with a bag of chips in his hand blocking the whole tv while I was telling him to get out of the way.

Indigenous won. My family celebrated the house erupted my father collapsed and I thanked the night sky for her support.





1 comment:

  1. Hi Jaylee

    I love how you used descriptive words.My favourite sentence was My family invaded my house with their screams and chants.
    I really enjoyed that game my family were screaming too.

    Keep up the amazing work, Cant wait for more blog posts
    Roezala

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